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Anyone can steal the idea. The premise is simple. It's a short about some crooks in a van. But a good number of them are inviting last minute friends to the job. We can call it too many crooks.

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We already have this in Australia. It's called the collapse of the construction industry. You can see when 10 chinese people crawl out of a van to do a job in 2 days, that used to take a handful of us skilled people 2 weeks to do. Then 2 years later the house needs to be rebuilt.

[-]YoureJewish0(0|0)

Are chinks the same as spics?

Its a bit of a different dynamic here. Given that we do not have a south america. The aboriginals here are not a numbers problem, so its all immigration. Which is mostly china and sand lands.

[-]JasonCarswell2(+2|0)

Great premise seed!

And you could do it in a Too Many Cooks style where it just goes on an on and on and on with various riffs on the theme.

Character types + scenario riffs and spoofs:

  • junkies and scum, desperation and villainy
  • cat burglars
  • Cat Woman
  • stereotypical mafia mobsters
  • stereotypical Jewish mafia
  • Ocean's Eleven
  • politicians, CEOs, billionaires
  • lazy socialists
  • migrant workers from Home Depot
  • MANY cartoon characters who steal cereal
  • crowded clown car + clown world + Pepe kek
  • stop for snacks & washroom break
  • road trip
  • North American tour
  • Uber driver / DoorDash driver gags
  • Taxi Driver / Thelma & Louise / F1 / driver movie references
  • A-Team / Knight Rider / Dukes Of Hazard / retro driver TV show references
  • build a large van interior set to shoot on, like the Tardis, bigger on the inside
  • features of an RV interior with all the amenities (and retro kitch sexytime bed?)
  • party in the van (like a standup limo but much larger for more folks) + DJ + disco lights
  • crowd gets bigger and bigger
  • would have to bring it back to the original concept, with just a van (exterior shot) where everyone exits the van (easy composite shot)

But what is the heist? The American Dream?

This is a story to develop.
A simpler concept could be developed and shot. With success, could go bigger.
But the fantastical scenarios would require much more time/money/effort/talent to produce - and could be worth it.
Or - some or all of it could be done with A.I.

Busy weekend planned but I can throw this on Projex to further develop.

[-]x0x70(0|0)

Exactly. Before we go on a road trip we need to make full use of the van. It needs to be piled.

Maybe there is a way once the cops are called and they call for layers on layers of backup it can be emphasized that cops are another kind of crook.

[-]LarrySwinger0(0|0)

Too many kooks*.